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Angels and Devils by ~DYBIM:iconDYBIM:



I know of angels and devils, who whisper,
And the scales sway sporadically, far from steady.
And the debate begins in the pursuit of answers.

Guilt ridden and glaring at the ice above,
I could bury this feeling, hide myself.
I could slur my pleads and create a certain undisturbed order
Reflecting my past resentments.
Hands shake and I can barely see past the tunnel-
Oh, this day’s been long, but innocence suits me well.

Plunged beyond the distant warmth:
Instinct, intuition, my hopes, my needs,
All but buried chaos and plagued desires.
Vodka in your streams and sex drips from your windows,
In a world where fiction is your fact and no mouth will shape to “no”.
The day is far too short, but the truth is lighter than lies.

I know of angels and devils, who whisper.
The balance of the battle brings you back down to Earth.
Sure, you may tire of my voice, but I keep your lines in order.
Now, does it hurt as reality strikes you?
Does it hurt to know your answer?
©2008-2009 ~DYBIM
:icondybim:

Author's Comments

On recommendation from the wonderful :iconstaraya:, I decided to post this up.

This was psychology homework. The task was to draw the Id, Ego and Superego. But I knew I'd only spend too long on the drawing. And I'd get frustrated and throw it out the window or something. So instead I wrote this.

Feedback strongly encouraged.

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:iconfayt008:
you know how fab you are...? its awesome :) proper good, and i never got to read it in class :/

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:icondybim:
Thank you! =D
Aww, Kit, you faved it too n_n
You've made me happy now =]
I've still got it in my folder xD But you've read it now so...yeah =p
xxxxxxxxx

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:iconfayt008:
silly rabit XD its really good ^^ you should be roud of your self all the time :)

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L- 'hey! kira!'
Light- 'what?'
XD
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clubs:
~Club-Sakujo
~Church-Of-L
*DeathNoteFanclub
~DMC-FC
~Light-Yagami-Fanclub
:icondybim:
=3 thank you!!! =D
*feels special now*
xxxxxx

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Don't Cry Because It's Over, Smile Because It Happened.

~GGDFC
:iconreikael:

Wow.
That's brilliant.



Your poems make me so glad!
:3


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I'm falling into memories of you </3
:icondybim:
Awwwww :3
You've made me all squeee and delighted =]
xxxxxx

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Don't Cry Because It's Over, Smile Because It Happened.

~GGDFC
:iconreikael:
awhh bless!
^_^
xxx


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I'm falling into memories of you </3

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