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Has it really been that long? (Since you found another)
I remember every day with you (You say you remember me; you haven’t even tried)
I missed every second of seeing- (And it’s clear you miss me, but I don’t feel the same)
Your eyes are like the Rain and (When your eyes show me Sky)
Now I don’t have to say goodbye to them again (Which I’ll never see myself in again)

And I’d lay my hands on your (bitter, twisted) shoulders,
And I’d stare (cold and harsh-) into your eyes,
Glide across (the lies you told me) your lips
And they’ll shape the answers I’ve (waited up all night for you) longed for.

And the sad truth is that I saved room for you (There’s just no room for you) in my life.
I practised our meeting religiously (I didn’t know how to say goodbye so you said it for me)
And when the day came, my practise proved useless (What the hell were you thinking all this time?)
I guess I just never forgot how you made me feel (Let’s put the past behind us now) as though I’m flying.

The Rain can’t replace my Sky (Know the rain keeps me alive, but my Sky keeps me safe)
And I’m taking a lot of chances with these feelings (You can still taste me like you did for two years)
But I’ve played hide and seek for far too long. (I told you I’d miss you when you’re gone)

Now I grow tired of cryptic messages.
I love(d) you.
Simple as that.
©2008-2009 ~DYBIM
:icondybim:

Author's Comments

Ololol.
This looks stupidly complicated to read, probably because there are a lot of different ways you can read it (take your pick). But when you figure it out it's a perfectly simple concept.

Please let me hear your interpretations of it, I'm interested now =3


Merry Christmas <3

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:iconfayt008:
its brilliant :) the (...) stuff reminds me of a hidden love letter if you ignore everything else outside of the brackets ^^

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Thanks, Kayt ^^

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